The Story starts has Raito is walking out of school after the school bell rang.

Raito:Whew,man i'm beat.Im taking my self home.
In a flash,the Grand fisher Hollow Shows up*
Raito:Shit..I hear ur the strongest hollow and u killed many Shinigamis over the past 50 years.
Grand Fisher:Thats right!AND IM GONNA KILL U!
Raito:Bring it Mud Face!

SERIOUSLY, STOP MAKING THESE CRAP RPS!

These are RPs they're just lines of Verb Text thrown together in a poorly formed fashion.

I'm sorry but reading this made me feel like vomiting.

American Idol. ftw.