coments please....tell me what i should so with the right side...i have no idea

Great job!

looks nice on the left side but as u prolly already kno right looks like shit -.-,sorry i got no experience with photoshop so i cnt tell u wat u can do ,but rating only the let side its a 7/10

A faded close-up of her face? (eyes&mouth)

5/10 i know you can do better, no offense but you focus all on the background when i.m.o is to give attention to the render right? I relise your experimenting but try to spotlight the render more than the background.

Its nice, just dont think the image suits it, and rights a little plane.